
I’m in the weird situation of wanting to keep something secret for my POV character for like one more chapter, but I want to continue hinting at what’s going on to the reader; letting them figure it out while my protagonist who has the exact same information doesn’t. Without making her look like an idiot.
To make it worse, the main reason that she hadn’t figured it out before now is because she was basically mind-controlled not to investigate.
Even that wouldn’t have been enough to prevent character B from just outright telling her what’s going on anyway because it’s the right thing to do. Except that my MC’s (mind controlled) insistence that she does not want to know was supported by character C who does not want to freak MC out. That was just enough prevent it.
But now MC is free of that particular compulsion, and Character C is not currently around. She’s alone with B, and it feels crazy not to ask about it.
I don’t know how to prevent this without it feeling contrived.
When was the last time someone read your story
and told you what actually worked?
Not just what to fix.
Not just grammar.
But what made them feel something.

My debut romance novel is being re-released on March 31st in a new edition with several new and expanded scenes!
Aspen Fahey never planned to become anyone’s community witch — especially not their late aunt’s.
A non-binary aspiring witchfluencer barely holding their life together in downtown Toronto, Aspen is burned out, heartbroken, and desperate for a reset. When an unexpected inheritance pulls them to a picturesque town on Vancouver Island, it feels like stepping into a cozy small-town fantasy, complete with folklore magic, and the chance to start over.
What they don’t expect is the complicated pull of new and old connections. A charming local who makes Aspen believe in possibility again. A cool-headed jock whose steady presence feels dangerously safe. And the one person from their past they never quite got over.
As Aspen rebuilds their aunt’s magical practice and learns what it truly means to serve a community, they’re forced to confront the emotional scars left by an abusive ex, and the fear that they might not be capable of the healthy love growing around them. But magic isn’t just about spells and rituals. It’s about trust, vulnerability, and choosing the people who choose you back.
In a town filled with cozy magic and modern folklore, Aspen must decide whether they’re ready to stop surviving, and finally allow themselves to belong.
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💜 Friends to Lovers
💜 Second-Chance Romance
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💜 Cozy Modern Fantasy
💜 Witchy / Community Magic
💜 Healing After Emotional Abuse
💜 Slow-Build Triad Romance
I’m so proud of the work that went into this new edition, and I’m really happy to have a chance to put my super gay, super trans stories into the world.
Special pricing on the eBook pre-order, which you can find here.
Before you publish — ask yourself:
Did anyone brutally honest read this?
If not, I’m available.
Any time I catch myself obsessing over the possibility of being confined to one genre/topic/style, I have to remind myself that pen names are a real thing that authors have used for pretty much ever and there’s nothing stopping me or anyone else from crafting a variety of personas to produce whatever art we desire.
You don’t have to use your real, legal name at all if you don’t want to - you could keyboard smash and just copy/paste the result onto every book cover and title page for eternity if you felt like it. You could create a fake Tumblr persona and use that as your pen name. You could use your initials, the name of your sworn enemy, your maiden name, the name you’ve always wanted but never got, et cetera and so on.
Moral of the story is “don’t limit your creative potential to ward off future problems/demands that don’t even exist yet”
Which scene feels illegal to publish?
And why does it exist at all?
I won’t judge.
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Don’t just tell people about your book, show them.
(This is a Booktok cinematic video I recently made for a book to help capture the mood of the story for social media)
If you have published your book or you have a book coming out and need content or a trailer that actually captures the emotion of your writing, I would definitely help you out
I am officially opening slots for Book Trailers / BookTok videos / Cinematic Teasers.
If you want to gain more readers for your book and make them feel the “vibe” before they even read page one, send me a DM I’m open to any question or consultation.
You find yourself alone in a strange desert land, unsure of who to trust. A mysterious thief offers you shelter for the night after taking pity on your miserable circumstances.
What do you do?
Go with him, innocently accepting his offer of shelter
Run away from him and try to strike out on your own
Go with him, but only to try and rob him yourself
See ResultsFind out what the protagonist of Splintertown actually does here!
It’s my second book’s birthday this month!
When a living creature falls asleep, small seeds fall from their nose and mouth and grow into dream-plants that sprout delicious dream-fruit.
Human dreams are the juiciest and most nutritious of all, and few people know this better than Kainma. An orphan who spent the first twelve years of her life subsiding mainly off of animal dream-plants while living in a complex cave network, Kainma decides to go to the Surface to seek a better life after a terrible tragedy. She finds a happier life after being taken in by a thief named Su and his family, but when Su’s mysterious past comes back to haunt him, Kainma and her new friends and family find themselves embroiled in a terrifying mystery that takes them to some of the darkest places in the Caves…and the mind.
Find out more and get a copy here!
To Betray {~600 word Noir/Crime flash}
Sunlight had long ago faded into a murky indigo on the horizon. Two cars parked perpendicularly from each other creating a pocket of seclusion in the alleyway behind the empty corner store. Silence- save for the steady drizzle of rain drumming from the open sky.
I check one more time over my shoulder, impatiently damning Lorenz for every minute that passed- leaving my adrenaline on edge, thrumming beneath my skin as I lie in wait. The illuminated watch on my wrist blinks another minute past. My back molars clench tightly, jaw bone screaming in distress.
A laugh echoes from the black void beyond the parked vehicles. It is a laugh I know well and it pushes me into action. Mind no longer in control. My body handed over to the beast within- the one prowling the confines of its cage the last hour.
I don’t let distraction of movement deter me from his laugh, one I have heard countless times these past years. It is a full bodied laugh, one that at times can be infectious. Can make your own ribs ache with giggles unshed.
I stealth my way around the half-rusted, tan sedan, praying my hurried footsteps are masked by the unceasing downpour. Rounding the corner I pull myself to a hard stop, hand falling to the pistol situated at my hip.
“I wouldn’t do that if I were you.” He says to me. A break in the clouds above, lets light shine down, illuminating half of his face. The face that trained me everything I know. A grin parts his lips, showing teeth in a cruel smile.
My hand continues to close around the butt of the gun. I would die fighting than let this sick and twisted monster continue to ruin this city. I hear the click of releasing safeties all around me, circling.
“Hold your fire,” he commands. Raising his hand in the air ceasing all action from his followers. He was not only a part of this. He was the leader. “Kora, it doesn’t have to be this way.”
“Like hell.” I confirmed as my fingers curl around the grip of the weapon. I feel the trigger beneath my finger and the second it’s free from its holster, it’s in the air. Shooting bullets aimlessly in an arc around me, blinded by the creeping darkness. Hoping that at least half will reach targets. Though I know deep down most are embedding themselves in the brick walls on either side of us.
“Why?” I scream at him, my mentor. Another shot and then another. The clip running low and I knew I wouldn’t have a second to spare to reload.
“Times is tough kid. You could have followed me. Been my protege. But you just couldn’t keep that pert little nose off the scent, could you?”
He takes even and calculated steps toward me. Not caring that my gun still has ammunition, not thinking I have the guts to pull the trigger on his convoluted face. Each step resonates with my pulse. My heart thumping just a fraction fast with each footfall. I play into the victim that he has portrayed me to be. I let him think he has me cornered. I let him let his guard down in victory.
Because when he is inches before me, he does not expect it when I push the barrel of the hand gun straight at his chest and fire. Pop
Pop
Pop.
I feel his blood splatter my face as I watch his body slink to the ground in a crumpled heap of cooling flesh.
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👑 The Gilded Cage 🕯️
Chapter Seven — (7/43)
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The rest of the evening was a blur of overwhelming opulence. Ms. Albright, rigid and efficient, led him through a house so vast it felt like a small hotel. There was a library filled with leather-bound books he would never dare touch, a gleaming professional-grade kitchen, a private gym, and a sprawling living room with a view of the city lights that made his stomach drop.
His room was larger than his entire apartment. It had a king-sized bed, a walk-in closet that was mostly empty save for a few impossibly soft bathrobes, and a bathroom with a shower big enough for a small car. His own spare belongings, hastily packed by Ms. Albright’s team, were already neatly folded in drawers. His worn copy of The Velveteen Rabbit looked out of place on the sleek nightstand.
Damien appeared briefly after the tour, standing in the doorway of Emilio’s new room.
“Sophie is asleep. She’s looking forward to seeing you tomorrow.”
Emilio simply nodded, too overwhelmed to speak.
“Get some rest,” Damien said, his voice softer than Emilio had ever heard it—almost, but not quite, empathetic.
Then he turned and walked away, leaving Emilio alone in the cavernous silence of the luxurious room.
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Emilio sank onto the edge of the bed, the mattress so soft it felt like he was floating. He pulled out his phone, scrolling through the contacts until he found Tasha. He needed to talk to her, to tell her everything. But then he remembered the nondisclosure agreement—and the unspoken threat of losing Sophie.
He sighed, the sound lost in the vastness of the room. This was it. No turning back. He was now officially entangled with Damien Langford, the architect of his new, gilded cage. The only comfort was the quiet hum of his phone confirming a new bank account had been set up—and a large sum of money already transferred.
Sleep didn’t come easily that first night. The bed was too soft, the silence too profound. Every creak of the floorboards, every distant hum of the city, seemed amplified in the unfamiliar space. Emilio replayed the events of the day again and again: Damien’s cold proposal, Ms. Albright’s unflappable efficiency, the dizzying tour of a life that felt like it belonged to someone else.
He finally drifted off just before dawn.
A discreet chime woke him.
7:00 a.m. Saturday.
Too early.
He found Damien in a vast, sunlit dining room.
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✨ Stories that ache, burn, and bloom. 🥀
📖 Read The Gilded Cage on Wattpad
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👑 𝓣𝓱𝓮 𝓖𝓲𝓵𝓭𝓮𝓭 𝓒𝓪𝓰𝓮 🕯️
Chapter Six — (6/43)
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✨ *Some signatures feel heavier than chains.*
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The breath caught in Emilio’s throat. He loved his job more than anything. It wasn’t just a paycheck; it was his passion, his purpose. To give it up, even temporarily, felt like a betrayal of himself, a wound cut deep. And Sophie, his sweet, bright Sophie, pulled out of the environment she thrived in? It was a low blow.
“As for responsibilities,” Ms. Albright interjected, her voice cutting through Emilio’s rising panic, “you will reside solely at this address. You will accompany Mr. Langford to all necessary social events, family gatherings, and any custody-related appointments. You will present a united front, publicly and privately. There will be no discussion of your previous employment, nor any indication that this is anything other than a legitimate marriage. Discretion is paramount.”
Emilio felt trapped, suffocating in the opulent room. “And… financial compensation?”
Damien picked up a pen, tapping it lightly against the contract. “A monthly allowance will be deposited into a new account, sufficient to cover all personal expenses. Your previous debts, including your grandmother’s medical bills, will be settled immediately upon the signing of this agreement. A substantial sum will be transferred to you upon the successful completion and dissolution of the marriage.”
The offer was staggering. Enough money to wipe out his crushing debt, to secure his grandmother’s future, to provide a safety net he’d never dreamed of. It was tempting—horrifyingly so. Everything he needed, offered with a chilling lack of warmth.
“You’ll sign a non-disclosure agreement,” Damien added, as if reading his mind, “regarding the true nature of our arrangement and any information you might glean during your time here.”
Emilio looked from the cold, unyielding face of Damien to the thick stack of legal papers. This wasn’t a marriage proposal; it was a surrender. He was trading his freedom, his identity, for financial security and the preservation of his other life.
He thought of Sophie, her eager smile, her small hand fitting perfectly in his. He thought of his grandmother, her tired eyes, her fragile hope.
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The pen clicked as Damien pushed the folder closer. “Read it carefully, Emilio. Then sign.”
Emilio reached out, his hand shaking as he picked up the pen. He was about to sign away his life—or at least the next year of it—to the most formidable man he’d ever met. The ink felt cold against his trembling fingers.
Emilio’s gaze darted over the pages, but the legal jargon blurred into an indecipherable mess. His mind fixated on the two clauses that mattered most: his grandmother’s medical bills paid, and the end of his stripping days. And the cost—his job, his freedom, his dignity. It felt like selling his soul, but the image of his grandmother’s worn hands, the worry etched into her face, eclipsed everything else.
He didn’t read every line. He couldn’t. He just found the blank space at the bottom of the last page, the dotted line waiting for him. His hand trembled so violently he had to brace it with his other, the pen scratching faintly as he scrawled his name:
*Emilio Torres.*
Ms. Albright, silent until now, efficiently slid another document across the desk. “And the non-disclosure agreement, Mr. Torres.”
Another signature. Another piece of himself given away.
When he finally lifted the pen, his hand ached as if he’d been wielding a sledgehammer instead of a ballpoint.
Damien took the documents, his movements precise, almost reverent. He handed them to Ms. Albright, who placed them back in the folder and snapped it shut with a definitive click. The sound echoed through the silent study, sealing Emilio’s fate.
“Excellent,” Damien stated, rising from his desk. He walked around to stand beside Emilio’s chair, his presence suddenly overwhelming. “Elena will arrange for your belongings to be moved over the weekend. You can begin residing here as of Monday morning.”
Emilio swallowed. Monday morning. He hadn’t even truly processed what he’d just done.
“We’ll make the public announcement of our engagement on Tuesday,” Damien continued, as if discussing a corporate merger. “A brief statement to a few media outlets, followed by an appearance at the charity gala next Thursday. Sophie will be informed of our engagement tomorrow.”
Sophie.
Oh, Sophie. How would she react to this whirlwind? To suddenly having a *new papa*—who was her teacher?
“You’ll be given a tour of the residence tonight,” Ms. Albright added smoothly, “and provided with a temporary access key. Your personal effects will be unpacked in your assigned suite. We’ve already taken the liberty of purchasing some essentials for you.”
*Assigned suite.*
*Essentials.*
Emilio felt a wave of dizzying unreality. His life—once simple, once predictable—was being dismantled and rebuilt around him without his consent.
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it is without a DOUBT my favorite series i’ve ever written and now the first FOUR have beautiful illustrated covers (ok wait a bit on no. 4 because i just got the cover back before) but if you’re looking for a ridiculous long interconnected roman a fleuve-esque series about a bunch of bitchy teenagers in ohio in the early aughts! man! this is for you! the first one was written almost as a parody of general early pop-punk songs wh ich is why it’s a little wack but. here are the covers. with the back so you can see the synop (done by this artist on fiverr)





Submissions are officially open for Woven Webs Issue 02 “Bite the Hand”! For this issue submissions are open to creators across all of Australia! Creators will be paid $100 per accepted piece.
The theme for this issue is inspired by the phrase “Don’t bite the hand that feeds you”. Your submission might include themes of loyalty, rebellion, status or power, or use imagery such as dogs, wolves, hands, teeth or eating. Or your submission might be in conversation with themes of rebellion by rebelling against typical form and structure.
Submissions will be open until ¼/26. Woven Webs is looking for fiction, poetry, visual art and more, especially works that usually struggle to be published in literary magazines like experimental and multi medium works, and speculative genres like science fiction and fantasy. We can’t wait to see what you come up with!
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