I am working on a rewrite of Transformers 2007 that acts as a sequel to Bumblebee. Here is a synopsis:
After being discovered hiding in a small California town since the late 1990s by teenager Mikaela Banes, Optimus Prime and his small team of Autobots must learn to adapt to the modern culture of 2007 and face the evil Decepticons before they can enact their plan to conquer Earth.
Stay tuned for more updates on this rewrite and other writing projects I am working on!
Rocky Rodent Rewrite
As a young mouse, Rocky grew up as a poor orphan, alone, on the streets of Detroit. To survive, he collected leftover food from restaurants, convenience stores, and fast-food outlets, and always shared his collection with other stray people and animals. Something he really enjoys doing when he wasn’t eating was doing graffiti, tagging, and renovating abandoned houses and places, but always respecting the law to avoid problems, and possibly with this talent, no one would go hungry anymore. When food was scarce or spoiled, Rocky’s friends make compost to combat waste, which later caught the attention of an owner. However, one day everything would change radically. Rocky was creating his art in an alley when a bright liquid substance fell from above onto his hair, which began to glow in different colors due to the radiation, which fortunately manifested safe and non-lethal reactions. At that same moment, a young woman named Melody, who was passing by, saw the scene and ran to help him. She took him to the hospital where Rocky ended up accidentally awakening his powers after being startled by needles, but she managed to calm him down and decided to help Rocky train and control his new powers. The man who was witnessing the homeless people’s efforts to survive and practice eco-gastronomy is Antonio Balboa, Melody’s father with pie, and owner of the best restaurant in town, known as Pie Face Balboa.
However, it wouldn’t be long before the mafia leader, Don Garcia, discovered Rocky’s radioactive powers and planned to use these hair-like powers to oust the mayor and take over the entire city with his army of hostile mutants.
With his training complete, Rocky now needs to look after the envelope containing the protection money for the restaurant, but then he discovers that his best friend, the homeless people, have been kidnapped by Garcia, who threatened to destroy even the food stalls if Antonio didn’t hand over the envelope.
Outraged by this cruelty, Rocky volunteered to save Melody before it was too late, and before leaving, the owner promised him and the others the food they needed after the mission. His hair has specific properties for fighting, and thanks to her intelligence and skills, Melody plans how they will all manage to escape the mafia and warn everyone in the city. The mutants sent by Garcia were defeated, one by one, allowing Rocky and Melody to arrive at City Hall in time, and as proof, they showed recordings of threats made by the cruel mobster about taking over the entire city and destroying important places. Don Garcia is exposed in the building’s real estate agency thanks to the homeless people, who helped Rocky as a way of giving back for the incredible things he did for them and the city. With the mafia gone, Antonio continued with his restaurant, and as he had promised before, he fed Rocky’s friends, providing them with new clothes and care. Melody went on to help other individuals, both with and without powers.
The need to eat showed that the right actions result in social benefits for a greater good, and that not every benefactor needs to be rewarded with a soulmate after their mission.
Awesome Possum Rewrite
Octavio Saudora is a dedicated and common possum from the Petrolina region of Pernambuco, who helps maintain the forest where he and other animals live.
The species that inhabit it are native to the region and also immigrants that can live there permanently or just stay while their habitats change each season. The male possum has two best friends, Killer and Rad, a 24cm brute bee and a shy rhinoceros.
As good friends, they trust and protect each other, looking for ways to keep the forest safe and thriving for a better, undamaged future.
However, one fateful day, destruction machines appeared in the forest, forcing the inhabitants to hide except Octavio, who, although he didn’t want to get involved in a fight, decided to intervene to stop the deforestation that was about to happen.
The destructive machines belong to a cruel and ambitious scientist known as Dr. Machino, he had betrayed his former colleagues just to achieve his goals involving pollution and clandestine experiments.
But the dialogue didn’t work as Octavio had no choice but to fight them, only to suffer severe damage to his body, causing his death. He was quickly rushed into emergency surgery.
During surgery, a pair of prosthetics made from a malleable, permanent metal were added to his arms and legs, and without them knowing, mysterious and colorful lights entered Octavio’s body, which spread internally from bottom to top.
The native scientists and sorcerers managed to bring Octavio back to life, and thanks to the leader’s blessing, he now has elemental powers and advanced magic to protect the forest without getting hurt again. After surgery, Octavio had to train with his prosthetics and powers, becoming Awesome Possum, an ecological hero now capable of facing Dr. Machino and saving the entire forest and its species and putting an end to deforestation alongside Killer and Rad.
The forest court helps with Octavio’s improvement and survival tests, using his knowledge as a form of strategy.
Michi Fukou was born and originally raised in Japan, however, while visiting the US with her family, she was kidnapped. While kidnapped, she was human trafficked and eventually ended up in the custody of Urla Daniels, where she was often objectified by the fact that she was a meif'wa. Despite Urla doing her best to try to erase Michi’s identity, (giving her different names, discouraging the practice of her culture, etc.) the meif'wa clung to what she had left of her family, learning fluent Japanese and participating in the traditional Japanese practices behind closed doors.
Really, she didn’t find any sense of freedom until she reached high school, when Urla finally let up on all of her pressures and allowed her to go to public school when she had previously been home-schooled. She found friendship for the first time at Meteli High, with this eventually leading to her hooking up with Laurance. Through her closeness with and interest in him, even before they dated, she especially made friends with quite a few Phoenix Drop kids, specifically Aphmau, Dante, and Garroth.
Laurance and Michi’s relationship would last surprisingly long, starting their junior year of high school, and ending in their sophomore year of college. One of the biggest catalysts in their break-up was Garroth starting to date Ivy, which led to Ivy befriending Michi. Ivy was an absolutely toxic influence on Michi, with their relationship becoming rather unhealthily codependent on Michi’s part, especially since she was losing a lot of her high school relationships, with everyone trying to adjust to this newer part of their lives. Thanks to her friendship with Ivy, Michi would end up retreating socially, relying on Ivy alone to be the only truly trustworthy relationship she’d have. Losing her relationships with Aphmau and Laurance ended up being the most messy during this part of her life. When eventually her relationship with Ivy fell through via blatant betrayal, Michi would be sent into an absolute mental health spiral, leading her to completely drop out of college.
In the modern day, Michi’s learned to be self-reliant and not trust anyone. Some of Ivy’s pettiness did rub off on her, specifically when it comes to Laurance and Aphmau. In Laurance’s case, she’ll flaunt new relationships she’s in and just how over him she is constantly. With Aphmau, she’s actively trying to sabotage her relationships whenever she gets the chance. More often than not, Cassie ends up being collateral. She does like Cassie, and is more willing to show her the less fucked up side of herself at times, but more often than not, she’s just trying to push her away. Michi and Donna really never connected, despite growing up together to some extent, and Michi somewhat actively avoids contact with Urla. As for her birth family, Michi’s given up all hope of finding them, at least, with her current living situation.
This is the ground work for Michi Fukou-Daniels.
Ristar Rewrite
In a far away from solar system, exists a different system knwon as Valdi, composed of seven elemental planets that coexist together in harmony for generations.
Oruto and her mate, Clareon, are powerful celestial gods who care for each people with love and wisdom, also being guardians of lost souls ready to reincarnate. While the souls went to their new lives, there was only one soul that remained by the couple’s side.
Filled with compassion and acceptance, they decided to make him their own son and named him Ristar. In his past life, he was a poor boy named Ravi, from Earth, who died because of the country’s extreme famine. But fortunately, his soul was collected in time before it became a small source of energy. With his parents’ blessings, the little star was gifted with powers that would make him a great guardian to protect the weak and fight for what is right when the time came for his awakening.
However, this peace didn’t last long when a pirate ship arrived in the system, commanded by a biomechanical individual known as Kaiser Greedy, who enslaved all the planets of Valdi while his subordinates, the Orblets, took control of the people, and with a corrupted compass, he was able to seal Clareon so that his plans could succeed.
Upon learning of Clareon’s sealing, the goddess allowed her son to awaken. Now awakened, Ristar was trained by his mother before setting off on the perilous journey that awaited him. The planets are Flora, Ubdertow, Scroch, Sonata, Freon, Automaton and Irobalt, where Greedy Castle was installed. Ristar’s journey is filled with self-discovery, justice, and courage, willing to face any enemy with his powers and elastic arms. He saved the elder, Avalon, who was possessed by Riho, and during the journey, he’s pursued by Greddy’s henchmen, Uranim and Inonis. Upon reaching the final planet, Ristar confronts Greedy, freeing Clareon. The battle was difficult, but all ended well when the enslaved peoples managed to break free and fight against the invaders, and the conqueror was eliminated once and for all, saving the galaxy.
in my Zane and Ein au Emerald secret is used to pointing out the stranded relationship of Zane and Garroth, with how bad of a brother Garroth kinda is.
So in emerald secret Ein isn’t doing the shadow figure thing. He basically just show up at the door Kim, Aaron, and Lucinda know that ein and Zane use to be firend but nothing else, (Ein wasn’t going out right violent with no Alpha title.) so they happy let him come out of the cold.
Ein didn’t even Know Zane was going to come by later, he want to check on the Utlima, is absolute delighted by the fact Zane shows up. he goes more of a manipulation route by mentioning why he left Phoenix drop, Ein wasn’t expelled for beating people up. Garroth with Lawrence’s help got him expelled.
Garroth just got a weird feeling about him, which is right Ein was slowly getting weird and weirder about Zane, (who isn’t reacting because he has no frame of reference for friendship). but he also jealous, though he didn’t want to admit it, that Zane is opening up so much to someone he hasn’t even know long.
As if Garroth isn’t half the reason for Zane’s insecurity, From teasing him, Zane being in his shadow, and Zane’s half blind eye. So they get Ein expelled and Garroth lies to Ein basically saying Zane doesn’t want to talk to him when he shows up at their house.
Ein know Garroth is lying but after being turn away by Garte and Garroth multiple time he decides to spend his time with research way to turn a human into a werewolf.
Zane think his first real friend didn’t even bother to try and stay friends, leading him to be even more closed off and mean. until Aphmau starts to chip away at it again.
Zane is obviously angry and gets into a screaming match with Garroth. everyone else is also disappointed in Garroth so nobody is really hear him out why Ein is so weird. causing even more distraction from Ein is ghost/Kim.
Ghost hates Zane, cause why did the ghost of Emmalyn love Zane when in diaries man kidnapped her and made her watch as he killed so many people including her husband. so Kim is being unusually violent to Zane.
which they knew Kim was possesed to they tell Zane for now to avoid Kim well they deal with the ghost. well Lucinda and Aaron are try to deal with ghost. Garroth is trying his best to keep Ein away from Zane but end up being pulled away by Aphmau who trys to give him a chance to explain himself.
this just leads Ein to get one on one time with Zane.
Heavily debating rewriting my longest (and first) fanfic because I’m torturing myself by rereading it and it’s SO BAD. Who let me do this. They’re awful. I could fix it but like- can I bear rereading all of that???
Decide for me because people like to press buttons
You guys are gonna hate me lol I have dread on a simmer rn
I have a plan- not putting it up on ao3 till the whole fic is done but I will be posting a link to Ellipsus once I get the next section done
Episode 5: The Duel
The rangers are excitedly practicing with their new Mystic Force ranger keys, trying to use various spells inside their hideout and seeing what they are capable of. This takes an unfortunate turn when spells are miscast or overlap as no one is coordinating. Jack (Blue) is frustrated at the carefree attitudes that everyone seems to have despite the reality of the situation and their responsibilities as rangers, and storms off.
While out Jack happens upon Skatana who is showing off his destruction swordsmanship to intimidate civilians into revealing anything they know about the rangers. Jack takes out his key and Morpher only to be stopped by Natalia (Pink) who accuses him of recklessness. Jack calms down and the two morph together. Jack confronts Skatana and Natalia attempts to deal with the X-borgs that Skatana calls for.
Shortly into the battle the other rangers arrive and assist Natalia before backing up Jack, all switching to their preferred red rangers. Skatana makes surprisingly quick work of the rangers except for Jack who is able to counter his swordplay while morphed into the Samurai red ranger, though not unscathed.
Skatana challenges Jack to a duel the next day, as the only one of the rangers that he respects as a swordsman. If Jack refuses then Skatana will simply destroy the other rangers right now. Jack of course agrees.
Back at the hideout Jack is furious with the other rangers and they argue about the lack of coordination.
Skatana returns to the mother ship to Prince Vekar’s frustrations.
Vekar: “What are you doing back here? You could have destroyed the rangers and you didn’t!”
Skatana reveals that despite his talent it took most of his efforts to defeat four of the rangers, and he wasn’t sure that he had enough power left to defeat the blue ranger which is why he issued the duel challenge. By focussing his power on the blue ranger he can remove his biggest obstacle on the ranger’s side, and clean up the rest afterwards. Prince Vekar approves.
Levira offers Skatana an advantage to guarantee his victory.
Jack spends the night training his swordplay while the rest of the rangers sleep, except for Natalia who is concerned about him. She watches him practice both single and dual blade styles with surprise.
The next day Jack morphs and leaves to meet Skatana. Natalia stands before him, also morphed, and hands Jack her rogue saber as a gesture of encouragement and belief in his skill. The two go together to meet Skatana.
Skatana calls foul that “Blue” didn’t come alone and calls for Bruisers and X-Borgs to “keep the pink ranger busy”. Luckily the other rogues arrive and aid Natalia while Jack battles Skatana, but they don’t interfere with the duel. When Skatana is losing to Jack’s dual sword style he unleashes the advantage that Levira gave him; sword tipped tendrils that allow him to overwhelm Jack with attacks from multiple directions.
Big-C takes out his saber but instead of intruding he tosses it to Jack. Bianca and Dominic follow suit and the five sabers merge until Jack is wielding a three bladed saber and two bladed saber. The encouragement from his teammates pushes Jack to lock into the fight with a more clear head. With greater focus and multiple blades Jack destroys the bladed tendrils and finishes off Skatana with a 5-blade slash.
Skatana is enlarged and the rangers respond with their Megazord, using the Mystic Dragon power to put Skatana down for good.
Back at their hideout everyone apologised to Jack for getting caught up in the thrill of being rangers and not taking the continued occupation of Earth properly. Jack apologises too for letting his temper get the better of him. They all promise to do better from now on, taking things more seriously but not so much that they stress out.
To start i’d like to say
But also i’m gonna start by giving the main cast (Brave Gang) some well needed redesigns
And i’m getting rid of the sugar gnomes. They annoy me They don’t deserve to exist
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Hi, @khibikandi here, just not a different blog. I’m rectifying Devsisters shitty writing by going back to the beginning, not BY 1-1, not Crispia 1-1, THE BEGINNING. All the way to the concept art that started this shit fire game.
Maybe. Dunno yet
Yes. Yes I will
Next question.
Got bored last night and decided to completely dissect Poppy Playtime so then I could see why it was irking me. Figured out the problem pretty quickly after writing the lore down in a notebook to keep track of everything(warning this will be long)
[[MORE]](Thanks to the Poppy Playtime Fanwiki for helping with keeping track of the lore). The problem I found out was:
While I really liked the Prototype design (Though what toy is he?? Poppy is a toy, Kissy Missy, Huggy Wuggy, etc etc, but we never see the toy the Prototype was. Not to mention If the Prototype was able to hide from the cameras, he must have been small right? How is he so big now??), I disliked them making a brand new character just to put as Lilly Love braids when Stela Greybar(Y'know, the HEAD OF PLAYCARE) is right there.
Harley coming back seems a bit like a Deus ex machina, but oh well. I also dislike that they bring in a new character every time and then just kill them off as well.
They do this every chapter, with the new character sometimes always the one that chases you at the end. The other thing that irked me(the biggest thing that I was Super annoyed about) is A, WHO THE FUCK ARE WE??? Mommy knows who we are, and so does Miss Delight, which means we OBVIOUSLY worked deeper in the facility.
Are we a child who grew up and worked in playtime(Which we know happened to some kids)? Are we just a worker who knew what was Going on in the facility and that’s why we feel guilty about the Hour Of Joy? And WHY are we there? Sure, we got the letter, but why exactly WOULD we go back? What’s our angle? At the same time too, who the fuck WROTE the letter? Was it Poppy? Was it Kissy Missy? Was it the fuckin Prototype??? Who wrote the letter??? And why did they write the letter. Why US?? Why are WE guilty for this?? Are they just going to tell us all of this in the last chapter cause that’s such a fucking cop out.
The other thing that’s so goddamn confusing to me is like, how in the seven hells Is a TOY FACTORY able to fucking build a fuckin journey to the center of the earth basically??? Sure you can say “Oh well, would you say that about FNAF or Bendy And The Ink Machine?” YES. YES I WOULD. At least for BATIM it stopped really taking itself super seriously twords the ending Of their game and made it some sort of like, loop?
And for FNAF, well… They built the pizzaplexs on-top of each other, which is what some people irl do. But at the same time, FNAF wasn’t a fucking TOY FACTORY WHICH IS WHAT PLAYTIME CO IS. It’s just so goddamn confusing and annoying and I genuinely cannot suspend my disbelief (or however you call it) anymore.
The lore is okay but you shouldn’t be giving it out through easy to miss VHS tapes and recorders. I missed a few VHS tapes while playing because I genuinely Did NOT see them at all.
All in all its just so… I liked Poppy Playtime. I still do. I was there years ago when the first chapter came out, hell, even before it came out and it was just a trailer. I’ve been here this whole time.
I know that I’ve been saying alot of things I dislike So, I’ll tell you a few things I liked. I liked the Prototype and Huggy Wuggy. I do like some of the chase sequences and I like the concept of Safe Haven (But not the actual Safe Haven in the game), and I liked Cat Nap as a villain alot. I do like the games.
I think it was a neat concept that kinda pushed Mascot Horror into overdrive. But lately the games are just… Eh. Im hoping chapter 6 is the last chapter(I hope we don’t have to deal with Giblet the whole time either because if I hear “I’m not a hero” one more fucking time) and they wrap it up nicely, but It seems like they’re a bit over their head at the moment. Hell even Garten Of Ban Ban explains why your there. I hope they explain in the next chapter, and I hope we can have a good conclusion to Poppy Playtime.
Now that I’m finished with all of that rambling, hi! I’m Saint the Tanuki. I post rambles about anything I’m interested in and like to create worlds out of the video games and stories I like.
If you like Poppy Playtime I’m doing a mini rewrite of the whole thing to try and make everything sound a bit better, and to make everything make a little more sense than it does right now. Follow me if you’d like to keep Updated on my AU (As it’ll be an AU technically) and for any more of my silly little rambles.
Thanks for reading!! 🐾🐾
Mun = white text sometimes in parentheses
Rewrite = Red text almost always in quotes
Tails Doll = Orange text most of the time italicized
Example:
Mun: (Hello.)
Rewrite: “Hello.”
Tails Doll: Squeak!!!!
Mun = just parentheses
Rewrite = just quotation marks
Tails Doll = normal ass text
Example:
Mun: (Hello.)
Rewrite: “Hello.”
Tails Doll: Squeak!!!!
I might have my Silver pop in from time to time, and if she does she will be bold blue
I’ve been meaning to do a full rewrite of s5 but my outline isn’t done and I was aiming to have it done by the end of January… oops.
Here’s some of my favorite ideas I’ve had for it, feel free to add onto them, I’m trying to get more motivation for this project.
For this one it comes mostly from my pet peeve of people theorizing that El created the upside down pre-s5 because it didn’t make sense to me. El didn’t know what the rest of Hawkins looked like, how would she make it in an alternate dimension? My solution is that instead Will created it when he was kidnapped. Before Will vanished, the upside down was dimension X. However when Will was kidnapped he tried to shape it into something more familiar and safe to him, his home. How he did this goes into my next one
3. Will’s powers
Honestly I HATE what Will’s powers are in s5. They’re constantly called “innate” by Mike, which just isn’t true? A. He gets them directly from Vecna B. He didn’t get this ability even as n option until after he was added to the hive mind, so he wasn’t born with it. I also don’t like that it’s just Vecna’s powers. Let Will have some autonomy! He gets his own unique set of powers. In my rewrite these powers are the ability to shape the upside down, the only power that Vecna does not have (in this universe). He had these powers from birth but one plothole I have is I haven’t figured out why he has had them since birth. He used these powers to create the upside down into what it is, and it’s why the upside down is stuck in the past while still being able to see Joyce’s lights. He lost these powers when the mindflayer took away his memories of what happened in the upside down. When he remembers, he gets them back.
My initial goal for this rewrite was more than what I’m probably gonna end up doing, but anybody is free to try this little challenge I made for myself.
The goal: prove that given what we had before s5, the season could have easily been pulled off well. How do we prove this? By having a bunch of people write a better season in the same amount of time the duffers had, therefore proving that the duffers are just bad writers and the season wasn’t doomed like many people thought.
Rules:
If anybody is attempting this feel free to @ me, I’d love to see :)
You are also free to comment any ideas you have since I’m currently lacking motivation
ALTI should preface this blog by explaining that this was specifically made to post my parody rewrite/fanfic(?) of Cats the Musical (Cats: The Grimdark Musical), and to make said parody easier to find. This blog is run by @rice-w0lf .
This blog will be frequently updated and songs will be added over time.
[Jail-licle Songs for Jail-licle Cats]
[Invitation to the Jail-licle Crawl]
[The Creeps & the Prison-clies]
