Chapters:
4/4
Fandom:
Original Work
Rating:
Mature
Warnings:
Major Character Death
Relationships:
Original Male Character/Original Male Character, Original male character(s) & Original female character(s)
Characters:
Original Male Character(s), Original Female Character(s), Original Non-Human Character(s)
Additional Tags:
Loss, Grief/Mourning, Memories, World War II, Flashbacks, Symbolism, Sakura (Cherry Blossoms), Wartime Romance, Japan, Japanese Mythology & Folklore, Japanese Character(s), Japanese Culture, no straight romance, not much romance at all in fact, POV First Person, Snow
Summary:
Japan during the war: A young writer comes to a village covered in snow and hidden deep in the mountains to recover from a serious illness. He meets two equally mysterious and fascinating women who are not quite what they seem to be at a first glance.
But the main question remains: is there anything that still keeps him in this mortal world when he lost the one person his heart belonged to?
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I urgently need some feedback on this original story I wrote as I really want to know whether my writing is any good or if I should just give up now. So if anyone wants to do me a huge favour, please read at least a part of it and give me a few pointers. I’d be forever grateful, honestly. Even just sharing the post would be nice too, really.
