The Gentlemen’s Store: Antoine’s Genesis of Refinement (Preppy TF)
Part One: The Dare
The cafeteria buzzed with the usual Tuesday afternoon chaos—lunch trays clattering, voices overlapping in a cacophony of teenage apathy. I sat at my usual table in the corner, away from the athletes and the popular kids, pushing a sad excuse for mashed potatoes around my plate. The October sunlight streaming through the tall windows highlighted the cafeteria’s institutional beige walls, making everything look even more depressing than it actually was.
“Yo, Antoine!”
I didn’t need to look up to know it was Demarcus Anderson. I’d recognize that particular brand of self-satisfied smugness anywhere—it preceded him like a cologne cloud. He dropped into the seat across from me with the kind of theatrical flair that suggested he’d been planning this entrance all morning.
“Man, what do you want?” I muttered, not bothering to hide my annoyance. Demarcus and I had been boys since third grade, but lately, his idea of friendship had shifted into something more sinister—a constant series of “jokes” that left me either humiliated or breaking laws I wasn’t quite ready for.
“Chill, chill,” he said, raising his hands. He was grinning, and not in a good way. “I got a proposition for you.”
I finally looked up. Demarcus was lanky, with sharp cheekbones and the kind of cold eyes that had gotten him locked up in juvie for two years on an attempted robbery charge. He’d gotten out six months ago, and ever since, he’d been trying to prove something—to himself, to me, to the neighborhood. Usually at my expense.
“Whatever it is, the answer is no,” I said flatly.
“You ain’t even heard it yet!” He leaned across the table, and I caught the faint smell of weed on his clothing. “You know that new store? Prep Inc.? The one on Fifth and Martin Luther King?”
I did know it. Everyone in the neighborhood knew it. It had opened about three weeks ago, this gleaming, pristine corner store with floor-to-ceiling windows and minimalist white interior design. The owners were clearly trying to “civilize” the neighborhood—offer “positive alternatives” to street culture, as the community board had said in their press release. To kids like us, it was a joke. A punchline. A store for kids with trust funds and summer homes, not kids like me whose parents worked double shifts just to keep us fed.
“Yeah, so?” I asked carefully.
“I dare you to spend one night at the kooky new clothing shop for men,” Demarcus said, his voice dropping to that theatrical whisper he used when he was about to propose something stupid. “After hours. And I dare you to steal something. Proof that you were there. Proof that you’re not some coward.”
My stomach clenched. This was exactly the kind of thing I’d been trying to avoid. Not because I was some model citizen—I’d cut classes more times than I could count this semester, and I had a healthy disdain for authority in all its forms—but because something about this particular store gave me an uneasy feeling. And because I was pretty sure Demarcus was trying to pull me deeper into something I couldn’t get out of.
“Nah, man. Hard pass,” I said, turning back to my potatoes.
“Oh, that’s right. I forgot. You’re scared,” Demarcus continued, his voice taking on that mocking edge. “Little Antoine’s too scared to—”
“I’m not scared,” I said, which was a mistake. The moment the words left my mouth, I knew I’d walked straight into his trap.
Demarcus grinned wider. “Then prove it.”
I opened my mouth to refuse again, but something stopped me. It was the memory of two years ago—Demarcus’s sixteenth birthday, when he’d been expecting a party, a celebration, something to mark the occasion. But he was in juvie, and I’d done nothing about it because, honestly, I hadn’t known what to do. I’d felt guilty for months.
“Fine,” I heard myself say. “But I’m only staying for two hours after closing. Two hours, and then I’m gone. No all-nighter nonsense.”
Demarcus’s eyes lit up like Christmas morning. “And you’ll steal something?”
“We’ll talk about it,” I said, which was as close to a yes as I was going to give him.
—
That evening, I told my parents I was studying at a friend’s house. It wasn’t a lie, exactly. Just a redirection of the truth. My mother, exhausted from a double shift at the hospital, simply nodded and went to bed. My father was already asleep in the living room, the television murmuring softly beside him.
As I walked toward Fifth and Martin Luther King, the October air bit at my skin. The sun was setting, painting the sky in shades of orange and purple. The neighborhood was transitioning—streetlights flickering on, the foot traffic shifting from workers heading home to people heading out for the evening. The contrast only made Prep Inc. stand out more starkly.
The store was closed, its lights dimmed to a soft amber glow. Through the windows, I could see the neat, almost sterile arrangement of merchandise. Suits and dress shirts lined one wall like soldiers at attention. Pants and slacks occupied another section. In the middle of the floor were display cases of underwear—the conservative kind with high waistbands and modest cuts, the kind of thing no self-respecting neighborhood kid would be caught dead wearing.
At the back of the store, I could see racks of outerwear, activewear, and what looked like European-style swimwear. Everything was arranged with such precision, such intentional care, that it felt less like a retail space and more like a mausoleum of masculinity.
My hands were shaking as I approached the entrance. I wasn’t typically a nervous person, but something about this felt wrong. Really wrong. The kind of wrong that usually ended with me in the principal’s office or worse.
Before I could knock or try the door, it opened.
The man who stood in the doorway was unlike anyone I’d ever seen. He was in his late fifties, maybe early sixties, with the kind of presence that seemed to expand to fill the entire space. His frame was broad and athletic—not the soft athleticism of someone who went to the gym occasionally, but the trained, powerful physique of someone who’d spent decades maintaining it. His hair was a rich brown shot through with distinguished silver, slicked back in a style that managed to be both vintage and contemporary. His eyes were a striking hazel-green, sharp and calculating, with laugh lines at the corners that suggested he found the world endlessly amusing.
He wore a three-piece suit in charcoal gray, perfectly tailored to his frame. The vest was visible beneath an open jacket, and his tie was knotted in a Windsor knot with the precision of someone who could do it in the dark. A pocket watch chain glinted gold against his vest. Even his shoes—oxfords in polished black leather—seemed to judge me for the scuffed sneakers on my feet.
“Can I help you, young man?” he asked, his voice smooth and deep, with an undertone of amusement.
I scrambled for an excuse, any excuse, but the words that came out were the truth. “Uh, nah. I was just in here to get my goon of a friend off my back. He dared me to come in here and spend the night and then steal something to prove I was here. I want no part of it and I just—” I ran out of breath, realizing I’d just confessed a felony to the owner of the store.
But the man didn’t look angry. Instead, he smiled—a warm, genuine smile that transformed his entire face. “No, son. You did the right thing by coming in here,” he said, stepping aside to allow me entrance. His voice was low and rumbling like distant thunder, but the words were enunciated with careful clarity. “And it took guts to own up to what’s going on. Come inside.”
I hesitated for only a moment before stepping through the threshold.
The interior of Prep Inc. was even more striking than it appeared from outside. The lighting was soft and warm, creating an atmosphere of understated luxury. The air smelled of fresh cotton, subtle cologne, and something else—something almost chemical that I couldn’t quite identify. The marble floors gleamed beneath my feet, reflecting the overhead lights.
“I’m Archer Lindsay,” the man said, extending his hand. His grip was firm but not aggressive, confident without being arrogant. “I’m the founder of Prep Inc.”
“Antoine Eubanks,” I replied automatically.
“Come with me, Antoine,” Mr. Lindsay said, releasing my hand. “Let’s talk.”
He led me to a small office in the back of the store, past racks of clothes and displays of accessories I didn’t even know existed. The office was as meticulously arranged as the retail space—dark wood furniture, shelves lined with what looked like fashion magazines and business books, and a large mahogany desk that seemed to command respect just by existing.
“Sit,” Mr. Lindsay said, gesturing to a leather chair.
I sat, feeling very small and very aware of how out of place I was in this space.
“Tell me about your friend,” Mr. Lindsay said, settling into his own chair behind the desk. “Demarcus Anderson, I assume?”
My eyes went wide. “How did you—”
“This neighborhood is small, Antoine. I make it my business to know the young men in it,” he replied calmly. “Demarcus Anderson. In juvie for attempted robbery at sixteen. Out now and looking to prove something. Am I right?”
I nodded slowly, unsettled by how much he knew.
“And you,” Mr. Lindsay continued, steepling his fingers. “You’re different. I can see it in you. You’re the kind of young man who tries to stay focused, but you get dragged into situations by association. You help your parents—I can tell by the calluses on your hands, the way you carry yourself with a sense of responsibility despite your outward presentation. But you’re hanging with a bad crowd, and it’s pulling you down.”
“How do you know all this?” I asked, my voice smaller than I intended.
“I’ve been watching,” he said simply. “I watch all the young men in this neighborhood. That’s what Prep Inc. is about, Antoine. It’s not just a clothing store. It’s a project. A mission, if you will. We believe that the right clothes, the right presentation, the right training and guidance can transform a young man’s trajectory. Change his entire future.”
“That’s…” I struggled to find words. “That’s kind of creepy, man.”
Mr. Lindsay laughed—a genuine, warm laugh that echoed through the small office. “I suppose it is, to someone not yet ready to understand what I’m offering. But I’m not going to hurt you, Antoine. I’m going to help you. If you let me.”
“Why?” I asked, and it was the most genuine question I’d asked anyone in years.
“Because I see potential in you,” Mr. Lindsay said, standing up and walking around the desk. He leaned against it, his posture casual but still commanding. “And because I remember being seventeen years old and feeling like I had to choose between my dignity and my loyalty. It’s a false choice, but it doesn’t feel false when you’re in it.”
He looked at me intently. “You told me the truth about why you came here. Most young men would have made up an elaborate lie. Most would have already tried to bolt when I opened the door. But you stayed, and you told the truth. That speaks to character, Antoine. Real character.”
I wanted to believe him. I wasn’t sure why, but I did.
“I looked up after Demarcus,” I admitted quietly. “Two years ago. On his birthday. But I didn’t know what to do or what to say, so I just… didn’t do anything.”
Mr. Lindsay nodded slowly. “That guilt you feel? That’s not a sign of weakness. That’s a sign of conscience. And conscience is something that can be cultivated, transformed, strengthened.” He paused. “I have a proposition for you, Antoine. But I need you to understand what you’re agreeing to before you agree to it.”
“Okay,” I said carefully.
“I want you to become a part of Prep Inc.,” Mr. Lindsay said. “Not as a criminal, not as someone stealing merchandise to prove something to a friend. But as a genuine member of our community. As a young man committed to transformation and excellence. There would be training, mentoring, a new wardrobe, guidance on everything from academics to social etiquette to fitness. And in exchange, you would represent the Prep Inc. brand—at school, in the community, as a model of what’s possible when a young man commits to self-improvement.”
“What’s the catch?” I asked, because there was always a catch.
Mr. Lindsay smiled slightly. “The catch is that you have to be willing to leave your old life behind. Completely. Not your family, but the rest of it. Demarcus. The gang mentality. The self-destructive behavior. All of it. It won’t be easy. But it will be worth it.”
I thought about Demarcus waiting for me to come back with stolen merchandise as proof I’d been here. I thought about the path I was on. I thought about my parents, exhausted and worried, trying to keep me on track despite my best efforts to derail myself.
“What would I have to do?” I asked.
“Starting right now?” Mr. Lindsay gestured toward a door I hadn’t noticed before, set into the back wall of the office. “You’d step through that door. You’d undergo a transformation. And you’d emerge as the best version of yourself that can possibly exist.”
The door looked normal enough—white painted wood, simple brass handle. But there was something about it that made my skin prickle.
“What kind of transformation?” I asked slowly.
“The kind that changes everything,” Mr. Lindsay replied. “But I need to know first: are you willing to be remade, Antoine? Are you willing to leave Antoine Eubanks behind and embrace the gentleman you could become? Are you ready to be a part of the Prep Inc. family?”
I stood up, my heart pounding in my chest. Every instinct was screaming at me to run, to back away, to refuse. But beneath those instincts was something else—a desperate hope that maybe, just maybe, there was a way out of the trajectory I was on. A way to become someone different. Someone better.
“Yes,” I heard myself say. “Yes, sir. I want to be a part of the Prep Inc. family.”
Mr. Lindsay’s smile widened, and his eyes seemed to glow with something I couldn’t quite name. “Excellent,” he said softly. “Then step through that door, Antoine. Your transformation awaits.”
I walked toward the door, each step feeling like a decision I couldn’t undo. Mr. Lindsay opened it for me, and I stepped through.
—
Part Two: The Transformation
The space beyond the door was nothing like the office. It was a large, circular room with a domed ceiling, and the walls were an iridescent white that seemed to shift between pearl and silver depending on how the light hit them. In the center of the room was a raised platform, and the air smelled strongly of that chemical scent I’d noticed earlier—something clean and sterile and vaguely medical.
“Stand in the center of the platform,” Mr. Lindsay instructed, his voice echoing strangely in the room.
I did as I was told, and the moment my feet touched the platform, I felt a low hum begin beneath me. It wasn’t a sound I heard so much as a sensation I felt—a vibration that seemed to resonate through my entire body.
“What’s happening?” I started to ask, but Mr. Lindsay raised a hand.
“Relax, Antoine,” he said calmly. “Don’t resist. Let it happen.”
A bright light began to emanate from the ceiling, growing stronger and stronger until it was almost blinding. I raised my hands to shield my eyes, but I couldn’t look away. The light was hypnotic, beautiful and terrifying all at once.
I felt a sensation like water washing over me, starting at the crown of my head and flowing downward. But it wasn’t water—it was something else entirely. It felt like electricity and warmth and cold all at the same time. I wanted to scream, but I couldn’t find my voice.
My consciousness began to drift, floating in the bright light like I was underwater. I could feel my body changing, but I couldn’t see what was happening. It felt like my insides were being rearranged, reorganized, rewritten. My memories seemed to fragment and scatter like a mirror broken into a thousand pieces.
When the light finally began to fade, I realized I was no longer wearing my street clothes. I was wearing something soft and light-blue—briefs that fit my frame perfectly, contoured to my body in a way that seemed anatomically precise. The waistband reached nearly to my navel, and the garment felt like it was made of silk.
“How are you feeling?” I heard Mr. Lindsay’s voice, still distant and dreamlike.
“Strange,” I managed to say, my voice sounding slightly different somehow. Cleaner. More refined.
A matching light-blue crewneck shirt appeared on my torso, as if by magic. No—not by magic. The light was still faintly glowing, and I understood now that it wasn’t a light at all. It was something else, something that existed at the intersection of science and something I didn’t have words for.
The shirt was snug against my chest, and I realized with a start that my torso was different. More defined. More muscular. I looked down in wonder, running my hands over the sculpted contours of my abs.
“Remarkable, isn’t it?” Mr. Lindsay’s voice cooed from somewhere beyond the platform. “You’re becoming the physical specimen you were always meant to be.”
A pair of matching socks slid onto my feet—also light blue, also perfect.
“Such a good preppy boy,” I heard Mr. Lindsay say, and his voice seemed to wrap around me like velvet. “You’re going to fit right in.”
Then came the black dress slacks, sliding up my legs with a sensation like silk. They fit my new frame perfectly, the inseam just the right length. A black belt appeared at my waist, woven leather with a small silver buckle, and I felt it fasten itself around me with a soft click.
Over the briefs and undershirt came a deep-blue dress shirt, so crisp and white-collar that it practically crackled with newness. It was tailored to my frame in a way that emphasized my shoulders and chest, making me look powerful and refined all at once. The buttons appeared as if by magic, fastening themselves from bottom to top.
But the transformation wasn’t finished.
I felt the weight of my dreadlocks lift from my shoulders, and then—pain. A sharp, sudden pain across my scalp as if my hair was being torn out by the roots. I tried to cry out, but my voice wouldn’t obey. The sensation continued, faster and faster, until my dreads had been completely removed. When I ran my hands over my head, my hair was gone, shorn down to nothing.
“No—” I tried to protest, but my words became sluggish, as if I was waking from a dream.
“Hush now,” Mr. Lindsay cooed. “It grows back stronger. Better. You’ll see.”
And he was right. I felt my hair growing back, but it was different this time. It grew in waves, perfectly spaced, perfectly formed, sculpted to frame my face in a way that was both masculine and refined. A clear substance—some kind of pomade or gel—smoothed itself into my hair, locking it in place.
A watch appeared on my wrist, gold with a white face and roman numerals. It felt heavier than a watch should, as if it carried significance beyond mere timekeeping.
“The watch is important,” Mr. Lindsay’s voice seemed to come from inside my mind now. “It represents discipline. Punctuality. The regulation of your new life by standards higher than yourself.”
A sport coat appeared on my shoulders, navy blue with a subtle plaid pattern. It fit perfectly, tailored to my new physique like a second skin. An unfamiliar tie wrapped itself around my neck—silk, midnight blue with thin white stripes—and tied itself in a perfect Windsor knot.
When I looked down at my hands, they were different too. My nails were trimmed neatly and filed to perfect ovals. My cuticles were manicured. The calluses from years of manual labor had been smoothed away, replaced with skin as smooth as a model’s.
“Almost done,” I heard Mr. Lindsay purr, and his voice seemed to vibrate through my bones. “Almost perfect. But I need to make sure that you remember nothing of your old life, so listen closely.”
The light flared again, but this time it was coming from inside me—emanating from my chest, spreading through my nervous system like warm honey.
And then Mr. Lindsay’s voice began to speak, and the words sank into me like stones into water, settling into the deepest parts of my consciousness.
You’re a good gentleman, a proud representative for all the future shoppers of Prep Inc.
I felt the truth of this settle into me. Yes, I was good. I was gentlemanly. I was proud.
You help the elderly cross the street.
I saw flashes of memory that weren’t mine—offering an arm to an elderly woman, helping her navigate a crosswalk, her grateful smile. These memories felt real. Lived.
You do your homework and study well for upcoming quizzes and exams.
I felt the satisfaction of getting an A on an exam, of raising my hand in class with the correct answer, of my teachers’ approval. When had I gotten an A? I couldn’t remember. But I knew I had. I was certain of it.
You never swear or listen to uncouth music that disrespects women.
I felt a deep revulsion at the thought of profanity, at the street rap that had once filled my ears with poetry of violence and degradation. How could I have ever listened to such things? The thought made me feel physically ill.
You play sports that not only train the body but also the mind and soul.
I saw myself diving off a board, water rushing toward me, the perfect arc of my body cutting cleanly through the surface. I was on the diving team. I had been on the diving team all along. The memory was so vivid, so detailed, that I couldn’t imagine a reality in which I wasn’t.
You obey your elders and the authority to the maximum.
I felt a profound respect for hierarchy, for order, for the people who guided me. Respect for Mr. Lindsay in particular, who had brought me into this life, this new life that was so clearly superior to the one I’d left behind.
You’re a modern-day man who keeps up with fashion trends and unashamed to know who you are.
I looked down at my suit and felt pride swell in my chest. These clothes were expressions of myself, advertisements of the man I’d become. There was no shame in looking good, in taking care of one’s appearance, in understanding the language of fashion.
But most of all…you are the perfect future husband for one of the older gentlemen of the Society of Masculinity.
This thought landed like a key fitting into a lock. Yes. That was my purpose. That was what I’d been made for. To be a companion to an older man, to be shaped by his influence, to provide him with the comfort and beauty of a perfectly cultivated younger man. It was an honor. It was what I wanted more than anything.
“I am a good boy,” I heard myself say aloud, my voice smooth and refined in a way I didn’t quite recognize. “The perfect future husband of one of the older gentlemen of the Society of Masculinity. I am the modern-day gentleman.”
The light faded completely, and I found myself standing on the platform in the circular room, transformed utterly. I looked down at my hands—perfectly manicured, smooth, elegant. I looked at the watch on my wrist. It read 7:45 PM. I looked at my reflection in a mirror that had appeared on the far wall, and I barely recognized myself.
The young man staring back at me was beautiful in a way the old Antoine had never been. He—I—had sharp cheekbones and luminous eyes. My skin seemed to glow with health and vitality. My hair was sculpted in perfect waves, my suit was immaculate, my posture was impeccable.
“Who am I?” I heard myself whisper.
“You are Alyn Dorrance Ellington,” Mr. Lindsay said, and I turned to see him standing in the doorway of the circular room, still wearing his perfect suit, still radiating that air of commanding authority. “You are one of my finest creations. And your life, from this moment forward, will be extraordinary.”
I believed him completely.
—
Part Three: The New Alyn
Over the following weeks, I—Alyn—settled into my new life with the ease of someone returning to a place they’d always belonged. My transformation extended beyond the physical. My apartment changed. My parents, when I saw them, seemed not to notice anything amiss. It was as if my change had rewritten the fabric of reality to accommodate this new version of me.
I attended Harrington Prep Academy, though I could have sworn I’d been going to Lincoln High just days ago. But the memories of the fancy private school stretched back for years—my parents had always gone without to afford my tuition, they’d always been so proud of my academic achievements. I had the yearbooks to prove it.
At school, I was exceptional. Teachers called on me for answers. I was invited to join clubs—the debate team, the student government, the National Honors Society. I was on the diving team, and I was good. Really good. My times were improving every week, my dives increasingly difficult and complex. My teammates looked at me with a mixture of admiration and envy.
But more importantly, I was visible to the right people. Older men, I realized with a start one day, looked at me with an intensity that went beyond normal observation. I would catch them watching me in the hallway, at the mall, at restaurants. At first, I found it unsettling. Then I found it flattering. This was my purpose, after all. This was what I had been remade for.
It was at the country club—the Harrington Country Club, where my family had apparently always been members—that I first saw him.
I was in the pool, working on my diving, when I noticed him watching from the observation deck. He was tall, probably in his mid-forties, with the kind of physique that spoke of years of dedicated fitness training. His skin was a deep bronze, his hair dark and slicked back from a face that could have belonged to a model, though there was a severity to his features that suggested a life lived with purpose and discipline.
He wore a tailored linen shirt unbuttoned at the collar, revealing a chest that was clearly muscular beneath the fine fabric. His watch—a platinum Rolex—caught the light as he raised a hand to shade his eyes, watching me as I climbed the diving board.
I climbed higher than I usually did, selecting a platform most of the younger divers never attempted. I could feel his eyes on me as I positioned myself at the edge, could feel his attention like a physical thing.
I dove.
The fall was exhilarating, the space above me opening into an infinite expanse of sky and light. I rotated once, twice, three times, my body perfectly controlled, my form flawless. I could see his face as I fell—intense, appreciative, predatory in a way that should have alarmed me but instead sent a thrill down my spine.
I sliced into the water cleanly, without a splash, and when I surfaced, he was still watching. He was smiling slightly, and when our eyes met, he raised his glass in a small toast before turning and walking away.
My heart was racing for reasons I didn’t quite understand.
I saw him again the next day. He was at the club cafe, reading a copy of the Economist with one leg crossed over the other, his posture perfect even in casual repose. When he saw me, he stood and gestured to the empty chair at his table.
“I watched your dive yesterday,” he said, his voice smooth and measured, with a faint accent I couldn’t quite place. European, maybe. “You have excellent form. But you were holding back.”
“I was?” I said, settling into the chair across from him.
“Yes,” he replied, studying me with an intensity that made me feel like he was looking through me, seeing all the hidden mechanisms beneath my skin. “You have the capability to attempt more difficult variations, but you’re being cautious. Why?”
“I don’t know,” I answered honestly. “I suppose I’ve never had a reason to push further.”
“Perhaps you do now,” he said, and something about the way he said it suggested he wasn’t talking about diving at all.
“I’m Marcus Ashford,” he continued, extending his hand. His grip was firm, his skin warm. “I own a private equity firm here in the city. I’m also something of a patron of the arts—which, I’ve come to believe, includes the art of developing young men.”
“Alyn Dorrance Ellington,” I replied, and it felt right to introduce myself to him. This man seemed important in a way that was difficult to articulate.
“I know who you are,” Marcus said, settling back into his seat. “I’ve made some inquiries. You’re part of Archer Lindsay’s project, aren’t you?”
I hesitated, but something about Marcus’s directness made me feel like lying would be pointless. “Yes,” I admitted.
“I thought so,” Marcus said, nodding as if this confirmed something he’d suspected. “Archer has excellent taste in young men. But I believe he may have outdone himself with you.” He paused. “Tell me, Alyn, what is your purpose? What do you believe you were made for?”
The question hung in the air between us, and I realized that this was the crucial moment. This was what everything had been leading toward.
“To be the perfect companion for a gentleman,” I heard myself say. “To be shaped by someone worth shaping me. To serve and to be cherished in return.”
Marcus smiled, and it was the most beautiful and terrible smile I’d ever seen. “Yes,” he said softly. “Yes, I believe we’ll suit each other very well indeed.”
He reached across the table and placed his hand over mine. His skin was warm, his touch assured and possessive. “Tell me, Alyn. Would you like to know what your future looks like? Because I can show you. I can offer you everything you’ve been trained for.”
I looked at his hand on mine, at the weight of the Rolex, at the strength and confidence in his bearing. In that moment, I knew with absolute certainty that this was the moment I had been waiting for since I stepped through the white door in Prep Inc.
“Yes,” I whispered. “Yes, I would very much like that.”
Marcus leaned back, his smile widening. “Excellent,” he said. “Then let me tell you about the life we’re going to build together.”
—
Epilogue: Two Months Later
I stood in the walk-in closet of the penthouse apartment—Marcus’s penthouse, which had become our penthouse—and examined the newest additions to my wardrobe. Armani suits in various shades of gray and navy. Hand-tailored shirts in Egyptian cotton. Italian leather shoes that cost more than my old family spent on groceries in a month.
Behind me, I could hear Marcus in the bedroom, preparing for the gala we’d be attending tonight. In two months, I’d become more than his companion. I’d become his project, his work of art, his investment in the future. He had connections with Archer Lindsay, it turned out. They belonged to something they called the Society of Masculinity—a collection of older, wealthy, powerful men who believed in cultivating young men into perfection, in creating lasting relationships built on mutual satisfaction and the careful molding of lesser men into greater versions of themselves.
I was one of six young men in Marcus’s life, though he’d made clear I was his favorite. The others came and went, lived in other apartments, served different purposes. But I lived here, slept in his bed, wore his preferred styles, studied the books he recommended, attended the events he selected.
And I was happy. Genuinely, completely happy in a way the old Antoine could never have been.
My phone buzzed with a text message. I checked it and felt a slight jolt. It was from a number I didn’t immediately recognize, but the words that appeared on screen hit me like a shock:
*Yo man is this Antoine? Its demarcus. The anderson dude. Hit me back please.*
I stared at the message for a long moment, my hand hovering over the keyboard. Some faint echo of my old self suggested I should respond, should explain what had happened to me, should try to… what? Save him? Warn him? Invite him?
The memory of Antoine Eubanks felt very distant now. Like a movie I’d watched once and largely forgotten. That boy—desperate, angry, stuck between two impossible worlds—felt like someone else entirely.
I deleted the message without responding.
“Alyn, darling, are you almost ready?” Marcus called from the bedroom.
“Coming, sir,” I called back, selecting the suit Marcus had laid out for me this morning—a charcoal Brioni with a midnight-blue shirt and a subtle tie in shades of silver and gray.
As I dressed, I caught sight of myself in the full-length mirror. The man looking back at me was perfection. Every detail cultivated, every aspect of my appearance curated, every inch of me designed to please and impress and satisfy.
This was who I was meant to be. This was what my life was supposed to look like.
I fastened my watch—Marcus’s gift to me, a Patek Philippe worth more than the house my parents lived in—and headed toward the bedroom where Marcus was waiting.
The old Antoine Eubanks was gone, transformed utterly into Alyn Dorrance Ellington. And as I took Marcus’s arm and prepared to step out into the glittering world of the Society of Masculinity’s elite, I couldn’t imagine ever wanting to be anything else.
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