I wish I could be kidnapped by a feeder with no limits
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“I don’t mind fetching them food or whatever the hell they want, but I’m not their fucking maid! Have some manners! Clean your room, stack your plates, FUCKING SHOWER AND USE A RAG ON A STICK INSTEAD OF FESTERING LIKE A BIOHAZRAD—”
He has high standards for cleanliness. (It leads to the best hatesex.)
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i give up trying to have a normal life, fuck it. Im getting obese this year
Buckle up skinny.
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I love learning i can do pull-ups now becauee I can lift a entire mes worth of lard over my head to help lardasses get off the couch >:3
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Not too far off from ctr actually-
Shame we never got “fake” versions of tawna and friends theyd fit in :P
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“I’d never do something so degrading as to let a machine burp me like some helpless old bag of wind!” Chi-Chi huffed and turned her nose up scoffing at the idea.
“I let my gas out while im in the mountains like a proper lady should.”
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You know when she made a machine to help work out trapped has it was half a joke and half an excuse to keep busy between projects-
But now that she’s done building the thing and the dozen energy drinks she guzzled designing it caught up to her she’s found herself actually needing it more and more…
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Fat fuck old men getting horny and hot and bothered by their own flabby bodies and stank…
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Can be cute and fun tbh! It’s good for embarrassing stuff and like power play scenes? Again though it’s something I’d only really discuss in private due to maybe grossing people out is all ^^;
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“Ooooo-! I-i think you´ve skipped a-a few s-steps, miss!” Haru can only help but break into a fit of jiggling, wheezing giggles as Digitan practically buried herself in Haru´s pillowy, curtainlike armflab. Sure, from the tickling sensation of having the lewd Uma digging around in her cavernous folds like a truffle hog, but there was something adorable about how unabashedly depraved she was. Perhaps it was just seeing her so blissful and happy, like Haru was the best thing to ever happen to her, or perhaps just for reminding Haru of herself-. Either way, she patted the horsegirl´s back with an unbelievably fatty hand. Get your salt lick in, dearie, you´ve earned the electrolytes.
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“Awww, really? You’re the first to ever say that about me, you know?” Haru smirked, leaning down, and letting Ann simply bask in the thick musk practically radiating off of her. It seemed a miracle the rest of the castle was so spotless still, with her tracking sweat with every sweat, given both her ass and belly were currently making extensive contact with the ground.
“Why don’t you sit back and relax…” As Haru smiled warmly at Ann, she lifted her arm back and upwards, her surprising strength dragging the chubby model in a similar direction. Ann’s face made swift contact with Haru’s sweaty, sloping extensive hill of a stomach, as she was thrown off her feet directly onto it.
“… And enjoy our cuisine from the most comfortable seat in the castle? Though, if I may be so impolite as to ask…” Haru smirked as her backside let out a hurricane fart, now with Ann’s body pressing down atop her gut. “Please do behave until I believe you’ve had enough. Wouldn’t want you to skip any of the food~.”
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Yes I force myself to burp while jerking off so I associate burps with orgasms… so embarrassing 🤤
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“Dude, I swear to God, I do not fucking care how obese you are, OPEN THE FUCKING WINDOWS SO I DON’T HAVE TO SMELL YOUR RANK ASSFUMES FROM ACROSS THE BLOODY HOUSE!”
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I’m very pleased to hear you found it so hot, because I was really happy with how it turned out. A lot of the events and things had been in my head for a while and I enjoyed finally putting them down in writing.
How is Hamish getting away with being dirty? I kind of skimmed over this because it would get in the way a little. Given his school has uniforms though, I’d expect teachers would pick up on his sloppiness. I had even considered having him get in trouble with a school prefect who tells him off, but I never explored it very far. I went to a school with a pretty strict dress code and so I know how picky schools can get, though I don’t think there were any rules on being dirty. I mean, if a kid slips in a pile of mud or gets sweaty after PE, it’s not like the school will force the kid to get changed. It was only stuff like tucking in your shirt and being clean shave. Though I note, during summer, the dress code was relaxed to allow you to not wear your shirt tucked in, so he’d only be in trouble for any stubble and possibly long hair (but I expect his hair hasn’t grown that long in only a few months). All in all, I think they’d be constrained in what they can force a student to do.
Just as a quick note in case you’re wondering about the school investigating his home situation: since Hamish is over 18, legally-speaking, he’s not a child, and so I don’t think his parents would be culpable of anything (eg neglect) and he’s able to consent to living like a slob. From the school’s perspective all they can do is maybe call his parents in and express their concerns, but it’s not like they can force them to act to make Hamish behave better. At worst maybe they’d expel him (for whatever reason) and well, Hamish is free to drop out since, again, he’s not a child, so he’d probably just happily stay home (and as you say, he’d get nothing but support from his parents). (why is he still at school? you may ask. I don’t know. Maybe his parents already paid for the year and can’t get a refund)
It gets difficult, with so many stories, to keep finding new ways of describing messes and so I’m glad you appreciate my efforts. Similes help a lot, but it’s also about how you write the description, not just the words themselves. Eg: “It smelt like farts and BO and old grease and stale urine”, here, it’s all the ‘and’s that help create a sense of just how overpowering it is.
I’ve imagined versions of the story with multiple friends (from as many as a proper friend group to just two), but I stuck with one purely because it’d be easiest and I could get the POV shift. I note that in most of those plans where there’d be multiple friends, I often imagined all of his friends being jealous/impressed like Leo is. The reader is free to decide for themselves what his other friends think (or if he had any others in the first place). Maybe their reactions to him all occurred off-screen in other classes and Leo is just the only one Hamish hangs around with at lunch (maybe the rest are off playing soccer or football or something else that requires (blegh) exercise).
The rest of the family thing is interesting and I’ve had ideas for stories involving their neighbours’ reactions etc. There’s plenty of things to explore for the next ’where are they now’ that features this family, so maybe down the track we’ll see. I don’t want to write things out now so I can save those ideas for then.
As a side-note, Leo doesn’t become a slob purely because I’d have to find a way for him to convince his parents and that would be an entire story in itself. This is another WATN possibility, but maybe when Leo finishes school he moves out of home to live with Hamish (maybe after Hamish’s career as a video game streamer starts to pay off and they can afford an apartment together).
But that’s a story for another time.